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sankalanka

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Posted - 13 Jul 2015 :  22:11:42  Show Profile Send sankalanka a Private Message  Reply with Quote
When she stops crying
the alarm bell must ring
you should get over your pride
and fall on your knees.

Fall on your knees
fall on your knees.

The spell of enchantment and control has been broken.

When she stops crying
you now tremble with fear.

The love in her eyes is gone
The cloak of self pity no more
the armor of defiance she now wears.

You should get over your pride
and fall on your knees.

Fall on your knees
fall on your knees.

The chains of disempowerment, deception and lies are falling apart.

When she stops crying
the alarm bells must ring.

She weeps no longer in her misery
cares less what you will do and say
and the love in her eyes is gone.

You should get over your pride
and fall on your knees.

Fall on your knees
fall on your knees.

When she stops crying
only thorns, rocks
and piercing objects will lay on your path.




toubab1020



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Posted - 13 Jul 2015 :  22:40:39  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Excellent,Thanks,very emotional content,The truth is sometimes unpleasant but never the less factual,this poem should make EVERY man think about what he may lose,the very person he thinks most of but for the "mistake" he made.

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Originally posted by sankalanka

When she stops crying
the alarm bell must ring
you should get over your pride
and fall on your knees.


"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.

Edited by - toubab1020 on 13 Jul 2015 22:44:39
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