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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 02 Jun 2008 :  02:39:22  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
You can hear it clearly
Its so loud
The silence
Making no noise
Yet audible
That silence that follows a bang
Making the ears ring
The heart beat fast
And make you smell blood
Its not fear
What it is
Is this that
Was there
Then faded so sudden
Is this that
Was alive and noisy
Then became silent
Is this that
Was Vibrant
Then became dormant
Is this that
Was so good
Then became evil
That you stop
Thinking
Hearing
Feeling
For just a wee second
That all you hear
Comes so loud
That all that you see
Comes so clear
An insight of things yet unknown

toubab1020



12314 Posts

Posted - 02 Jun 2008 :  12:43:16  Show Profile Send toubab1020 a Private Message

I hope you are keeping excercise books with all these poems written down inside.

"Simple is good" & I strongly dislike politics. You cannot defend the indefensible.
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kaanibaa



United Kingdom
1169 Posts

Posted - 03 Jun 2008 :  00:54:57  Show Profile Send kaanibaa a Private Message
Yes toubab I do keep records of my scribbles , perhaps they would one day qualify as poems. Thanks for your comment on shadows. The rambling mind just makes me scribble at times even I find the words I put down intriguing, but like I said its just me scribbling sense and nonsense.
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